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The Thorns of Love (Critique)
This is a critique of: "The Thorns of Love (Chapter 1 to and Chapter 2 part 1)
By: :icontheevilovelords: TheEvilOvelords
Word Count: (Chapter 1 pt 1) ~3678 words
(Chapter 1 pt 2) ~3225 words
(Chapter 2 pt 1) ~2743 words
Fandom: Vampire Knight
(Chapter 1 pt 1 & 2)
~Critique of the story~
The first lines of 'Thorns of Love (Chapter 1 pt 1) is
"Boring, that was one way to describe life at the moment. Grim was a way of describing how the atmosphere around the Academy felt. For some reason it has been like that for a while, actually. The place was darker than usual, even though it was dark most of the time anyway."
Despite the tone of the entire chapter, do not overlook this line! Foreshadowing is one of my favorites and my friend, have you executed it quite beautifully.
The next scenes introduce the characters (and I must guilty admit that I was quite confused by who and you were referring to at points.)
During, the telephone conversation, you said two different names:
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Same As He'll Never Know
One Day He Will
By: :iconhorrorruby7: for TMNTContests's contest with the topic: "Donatello"
Word Count: ~286 words
Fandom: TMNT 2003
Donatello will remove the goggles that mark the rim of his eyes. He will quickly glance at his homemade clock; informing him of yet another sleepless night. He will stand, a few old bones cracking, and habitually make his way to the kitchen. He'll make his usual no-sugar coffee and from there, he'll continue this not-so-normal day.
As usual, he'll walk by his bickering brothers. He'll ignore their venomous words. Not hear the hatred that plague their words like raging thorns.
He'll walk past his cheerful brother. He'll try to ignore him. When that fails, and when the suspicions arise, he'll smile that fake smile of his. Make everyone believe that everything was alright.
Later on, he'll listen to his brother for the umpteenth time about some threat. How some enemy is trying to terminate them. Destroy them.
And even later, they'll be on a mis
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Literature
Take Your Time
"I'll wait for you." ficlet
Story by: :iconHorrorRuby7: as a gift to :iconorangebarmy:
Word Count: ~ 313 words
Fandom: TMNT 2003 ((AU! Human!Turtles))
Warning: Tcest. Don't like? Don't read!
Michelangelo sat immobile under the strong embrace of Raphael. They were locked within each other. They were interwoven as one- In mind, body, and spirit.
Michelangelo felt his heart beat desperately in his chest. Raphael did as well and tightened his grip around his lover. He rested his head against the dirty lion mane that was his lover's hair and closed his eyes.
Never had a silence spoke so loudly. It screamed loving serenades and both listened very carefully, not wanting to forget the precious songs of their life. Of each other.
Michelangelo used his thin hand to caress Raphael's chest. He slipped it under his camouflage shirt and felt Raphael's broad chest. Raphael grabbed Michelangelo's face and gave him a long, lusty kiss on his pouty lips.
Michelangelo moved to unbuttoned Raphael's
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Demons of My Past (Critique)
This is a critique of: "The Demons of My Past" (Chapter 1)
By: :iconnancayleena: NancayLeena
Word Count: ~ 931 words
Fandom: TMNT 2012
~~ Critique of the story~~
The first few lines of "The Demons of My Past" are:
Dear Dairy,
My name is Leonardo, and my sons, mostly Donatello, told me that writing in a book could help me deal with things in my past. Well, where do I start? Probably at the beginning, huh? It all started like this...

I immediately knew that this story would be an AU (Alternate Universe) type story. In the first few lines, It compels me to read more. Leo is a father? And what horrible things have happened in his past?
As I continued to read, the first scene described of the turtles being dropped by a young boy (also recognized in the 2003 turtles timeline ;)) A tragedy occurred, but I wish it was more described in this scene. Maybe more on how Leo felt when his would-be-brothers died. Or on his unnerving compulsion to keep his dead kin, even after so many yea
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pinkythepink Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2016  Professional Artisan Crafter
:love: Thank you for the favorites, it really means ever so much to me that you enjoy my artwork! I invite you to add me to your watch so that you can see all the future beaded and stitched pieces I have planned! :blowkiss: Just think of the sparkles... :squee:
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Thank you SO much for the points! It means a lot ;w; <33
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Feibelle Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2016
Yes, it's still me Dennehotso
I thought you were gone from DA forever. D':
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HorrorRuby7 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I'm giving it another shot....... but I'm moreso on this account :iconmumkins-san: (yeah I need an avatar lol). I only came back for you and a few others ;__;
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Awww.  Q . Q
Yeah, I only came back for a select few too.
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